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The NAEP Writing Achievement Levels

Grade 4
Grade 8
Grade 12

Specific definitions of the Basic, Proficient, and Advanced achievement levels for grades 4, 8, and 12 are presented in the tables that follow. The achievement levels are cumulative. Therefore, students performing at the Proficient level also display the competencies associated with the Basic level, and students at the Advanced level also demonstrate the skills and knowledge associated with both the Basic and the Proficient levels. For each achievement level listed, the scale score that corresponds to the beginning of that level is shown in parentheses. In writing, the scale ranges from 0 to 300 for each grade.

Grade 4

Basic
(115)

Students performing at the Basic level should be able to:

  • demonstrate appropriate response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • use some supporting details;
  • demonstrate organization appropriate to the task; and
  • demonstrate sufficient command of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization to communicate to the reader.

Proficient
(176)

Students performing at the Proficient level should be able to:

  • create an effective response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • demonstrate an awareness of the intended audience;
  • use effective organization appropriate to the task;
  • use sufficient elaboration to clarify and enhance the central idea;
  • use language appropriate to the task and intended audience; and
  • have few errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization that interfere with communication.

Advanced
(225)

Students performing at the Advanced level should be able to:

  • create an effective and elaborated response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • express analytical, critical, and/or creative thinking;
  • have unity of form and content in response to the task;
  • demonstrate an awareness of the intended audience;
  • use effective organization appropriate to the task;
  • show proficient use of transitional elements;
  • elaborate and enhance the central idea with descriptive and supportive details;
  • use language appropriate to the task and intended audience; and
  • enhance meaning through control of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.


Grade 8

Basic
(114)

Students performing at the Basic level should be able to:

  • demonstrate appropriate response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • use some supporting details;
  • demonstrate organization appropriate to the task; and
  • demonstrate sufficient command of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization to communicate to the reader.

Proficient
(173)

Students performing at the Proficient level should be able to:

  • create an effective response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • express analytical, critical, and/or creative thinking;
  • demonstrate an awareness of the purpose and intended audience;
  • have logical and observable organization appropriate to the task;
  • show effective use of transitional elements;
  • use sufficient elaboration to clarify and enhance the central idea;
  • use language (e.g., variety of word choice and sentence structure) appropriate to the task; and
  • have few errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization that interfere with communication.

Advanced
(224)

Students performing at the Advanced level should be able to:

  • create an effective and elaborated response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • express analytical, critical, and/or creative thinking;
  • have well-crafted, cohesive organization appropriate to the task;
  • show sophisticated use of transitional elements;
  • use varied and elaborated supporting details in appropriate, extended response;
  • begin to develop a personal style or voice;
  • demonstrate precise and varied use of language;
  • use a variety of strategies such as analogies, illustrations, examples, anecdotes, and figurative language; and
  • enhance meaning through control of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.


Grade 12

Basic
(122)

Students performing at the Basic level should be able to:

  • demonstrate appropriate response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • demonstrate reflection and insight and evidence of analytical, critical, or evaluative thinking;
  • show evidence of conscious organization;
  • use supporting details;
  • reveal developing personal style or voice; and
  • demonstrate sufficient command of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization to communicate to the reader.

Proficient
(178)

Students performing at the Proficient level should be able to:

  • create an effective response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • demonstrate reflection and insight and evidence of analytical, critical, or evaluative thinking;
  • use convincing elaboration and development to clarify and enhance the central idea;
  • have logical and observable organization appropriate to the task;
  • show effective use of transitional elements;
  • reveal personal style or voice;
  • use language appropriate to the task and intended audience; and
  • have few errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization that interfere with communication.

Advanced
(230)

Students performing at the Advanced level should be able to:

  • create an effective and elaborated response to the task in form, content, and language;
  • show maturity and sophistication in analytical, critical, and creative thinking;
  • have well-crafted, cohesive organization appropriate to the task;
  • show sophisticated use of transitional elements;
  • use illustrative and varied supportive details;
  • use rich, compelling language;
  • show evidence of a personal style or voice;
  • display a variety of strategies such as anecdotes, repetition, and literary devices to support and develop ideas; and
  • enhance meaning through control of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.



Last updated 10 July 2003 (CC)